Clover Madison

I actually didn't feel that the beginning was that slow. I was actually drawn in by the beginning. Your description was very good. I could clearly get a sense of ...

This was a really good story, I loved the description of the Japanese Garden. You described Andersons perfectly. I wanted to know more about Beth, maybe what she looked like, ...

Please critique! This is my third and final story for my Creative Writing class. The Pearlman Institute It was the second time in her life that she felt intimidated by ...

From what you wrote it sounds like you need to write - I'd say go for writing. Just because the words don't flow onto the page doesn't mean your not ...

I think it has potential. Just try not to make it too cliche'. The whole taking over Microsoft thing could be pretty entertaining. I say go for it and see ...

Okay here's the deal. For my final story for my Creative Writing class I want to write this idea I've had for a while. Its working title is Skin. Some ...

Please critique! Critique anything from grammar to syntax to plot line. I want to hear how you felt during the story, what you thought. Was it believable? Did it suck? ...

I like it. do you have a title? It reminds me of history and I love history, so that's a good thing.

Thank you so much! I loved your comments, they really helped me see what the reader was seeing. My changes in tense are definatly a problem...thanks for pointing them out. ...

Thank you so much for the nice comments - I look foreword to reading your comments. Sorry about the whole ? mark thing It changed it when I did copypaste. ...

So here's my story that I wrote for Creative Writing. It's okay...I hope my next two will be better. This is mostly a characterization story on the early life of ...

Twilight by Stephenie Meyer - I've never met anyone who hasn't liked it. (And almost everyone I know has read it)

I've e-mailed several authors. Most of the time I just get a generic reply. I did find my favorite author on Myspace tho and I got to talk to her ...

I've read books where the author goes from 1st to 3rd person. It's a weird change that usually throws the reader off. Unless done for a specific reason I wouldn't ...

I've read books where the author goes from 1st to 3rd person. It's a weird change that usually throws the reader off. Unless done for a specific reason I wouldn't ...